Saturday 9 January 2016

Teacher/Peer - Feedback


After finishing my digipak I decided to get a focus group together in order to get feedback from my peers and teacher. I handed out a strengths and improvements sheet and these were the responses:

Strengths:

  • Love the close ups of the eyes, very intense.
  • I like the ski mask. 
  • The cover links to the narrative.
  • The colours link to the video.
  • Fits the type of video.
  • Good editing.
  • Cover looks good, colours and typography.
  • The logo's design.
  • Professional.
  • Text, colours and composition.
Improvements:
  • Brighten the image.
  • Too dark.
  • Vignette. 
  • Writing is too dark.
  • Too much grey




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